Chuck Johnson feedback thread.

[CJ]

Well, I am back. It feels good to be writing again. This time around, I want to shift gears and play the game a little more seriously. So I wrote less comedy and more edgy. Also, I always wanted to write a saga like Obi so here is my crack at it!

Anyway, Chuck is back in business but there are some skeletons in the closet waiting for him. He is returning to a fed that he knows no one really in, even the name has changed! He will have to find his place out there and finally make a go of his career before it is too late. The recent time away from the sport has hardened him a bit and left him time to really put things in perspective. First up: Imanuel Taylor.

Let me know what you thought? Thanks in advance.

[Obi]

Great Job, CJ. The new direction that you are taking is very interesting. Great use of description as well.

[CJ]

Well my second segment is up. I feel like I am writing on all cylinders right now and when I look back at my roleplays lately, I really feel good about them. I am not sure if we have people reading these or not but If anyone is, I am grateful. Hell, if you want to leave me a bit of feedback please do, even! Thanks.

[patera]

*clap

Excellent roleplay, CJ. That was a classic roleplay in every sense of the word! There was a breakdown of our character's past histories, a look back on how the character's careers have evolved, and lastly, a healthy dose of storyline. You had great match relevance for sure. You're heating up man.