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Post by jackbull on Aug 16, 2011 23:32:32 GMT -5
.... you don't know what you're talking about.
Man, Pro Boards needs bigger titles. That would have been a great title for a thread.
Fuck it, anyway, on to business. So yeah, this is a feedback thread for my Royal Rumble RP if anyone has the time.
Cheers bitches.
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Aug 17, 2011 6:57:30 GMT -5
From what i remember it was a good piece, but not a great one. I've read your work before and sometimes you knock it out of the park and others, like this one, seem to say the same thing twenty different times.
Every opponent was cut down quickly and barely had their strengths mentioned. Now i know how Bull's character is and for his character i was surprised that he actually acknowledged some of the competitors.
Small mistakes here and there that we all make are always ignorable. But the talk about how the heavy weight title was already Bull's made me think bull was taking the Rumble as a joke and not the true test it is. I mean that could just be the asshole part of him or just my reading.
Over all it was a solid piece, and we all were working with restrictions. It was a good piece but it didn't dazzle if you understand what i mean.
Best of luck Bull. We find out the winner in five days.
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Post by jackbull on Aug 17, 2011 10:17:26 GMT -5
Cheers for taking the time dude.
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Aug 17, 2011 22:10:33 GMT -5
I do what i can
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