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Post by primetime on Jun 1, 2011 20:55:14 GMT -5
OMG, it felt so good competing!! I set out to write a decent roleplay since we all know the ending to this match. The thing was, as I wrote, all of these months of wanting to compete poured out of me until I had a fucking MAN-GASM! Anyway, I am stoked about the RP even if yous aren't, lol. So, let me know what you thought?
As you guys read, this RP was basically the sum of the past storyline and at the same time, the full history of Mark Rivera upon his entry into the EUW a few years ago, from his perspective of course. I felt it made sense and was important to go there for others to really see why and who Mark Rivera is. What drives him to terrorize the EUW like he does? Why does he hate Kirk Kennedy? What are the reasons?!! I mean, if this is the final bit of the Mark Rivera story, why not unveil it all, right?
So there it is. All done now. Bye!
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Post by jackbull on Jun 1, 2011 21:32:35 GMT -5
That was a roleplay? Oh right. I thought you were just doing a test run. I mean, uh, yeah. Uh. It was, it was, different. In it's own unique way.
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Post by primetime on Jun 1, 2011 21:36:22 GMT -5
That was a roleplay? Oh right. I thought you were just doing a test run. I mean, uh, yeah. Uh. It was, it was, different. In it's own unique way. Dude, just say it. "Jaden, I am lucky that the ending has been predetermined. That RP was Top Notch. If that was a test run, I hate to see what you can do when... wait.. I have seen what you can do.."
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Post by jackbull on Jun 1, 2011 21:54:52 GMT -5
Jaden, I am lucky that the ending has been predetermined. Because your RP for Rivera is Top Notch.
I should just write an entire RP where Kennedy shits his pants and passes out because there really is no hope in beating you.
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Post by primetime on Jun 1, 2011 21:59:06 GMT -5
Thanks, Jack! You're a real pal!
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Post by jackbull on Jun 1, 2011 22:14:12 GMT -5
Prick.
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Post by Skye on Jun 2, 2011 17:12:41 GMT -5
You two are so cute Great RP Jaden. Was a nice read at the airport today.
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Post by The Scorpion on Jun 2, 2011 20:09:28 GMT -5
Heh, it's so obvious that despite all the bickering these two truly love each other. It's just that neither one is willing to come out and say it due the manliness card. We have a drunken British bouncer and a smokin' American motorcycle enthusiast.....and the end result is a bromance? That's a sitcom waiting to happen.
All jokes aside though, it was a fine piece Jaden. It really hammered home the stakes of the match. I'm really looking forward to the match itself.
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Post by primetime on Jun 2, 2011 20:28:41 GMT -5
Thanks folks! Anyone else check it out? It's an important RP in all actuality that sums up everything you guys have been a part of over the year.
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Post by Skye on Jun 3, 2011 11:25:39 GMT -5
We have a drunken British bouncer and a smokin' American motorcycle enthusiast.....and the end result is a bromance? That's a sitcom waiting to happen. That's a good one indeed!!
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Post by Mr. C on Jun 3, 2011 13:47:39 GMT -5
Could have used more match relevance, if you ask me.
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Post by Obi on Jun 5, 2011 16:49:04 GMT -5
I don't know. I think it was pretty damn good. This match is more about the fed as a whole and the finale of a storyline. So, you hit all the right spots. Yes, Match Relevance was not the main focus but underneath it all.. it was. It just was not blatant. The history of Rivera was well done too. I like how you went all the way back to Rivera's announcer days. Well played.
The RP had a definite "Xplode" feel to it. It was intense when it should have been. I was certainly interested in reading it from start to finish so mission accomplished. I find no issues with this RP at all. Great job.
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Jun 5, 2011 16:53:32 GMT -5
I don't know. I think it was pretty damn good. I think he was being sarcastic. For quick actual feedback, I thought it was good. Had a big feel to it, great way of rolling together all that has happened and making the finale big as well.
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Post by Obi on Jun 5, 2011 16:54:28 GMT -5
I don't know. I think it was pretty damn good. I think he was being sarcastic. For quick actual feedback, I thought it was good. Had a big feel to it, great way of rolling together all that has happened and making the finale big as well. I wasn't referring to Tom at all if that is what you mean. We all are entitled to our opinions.
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Post by primetime on Jun 5, 2011 18:12:20 GMT -5
Thanks guys. You know though, the match relevance was lighter than it could have been so Tommeh is right. I just felt that with the ending predetermined I could just have fun with it and all. Awesome replies gents!
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Post by Mr. C on Jun 5, 2011 18:28:42 GMT -5
I was joking. The whole damn thing was match relevance and it was a phenomenal read! A great narrative, my man.
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Post by jackbull on Jun 5, 2011 18:32:51 GMT -5
I still maintain it was shit
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Post by primetime on Jun 5, 2011 18:52:57 GMT -5
I was joking. The whole damn thing was match relevance and it was a phenomenal read! A great narrative, my man. You know... Tommeh has never said this type of thing to me.. ever. I am taking this and keeping it. Bam! Thanks, homie!
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Post by Mr. C on Jun 5, 2011 19:04:00 GMT -5
But of course! I'll applaud anyone when they deserve it.
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Sept 16, 2011 9:33:04 GMT -5
So with the most recent installment of X i will say his mind is interesting. Trying to get his hold manager is a nice sentimental touch in my opinion but it's the girl that caught my attention because she is just there but X makes her important. Kinda like an ace in the hole.
Match relevance and storyline blah blah yea it was a roleplay that his all the points but kinda a waste to tell YOU that.
Good roleplay, didn't shock or awe me but left me wanting more. I know you like to keep people guessing so i guess that's what this is. because aside from the unanswered questions it was a great piece.
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