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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:08:55 GMT -5
So i got off the phone with Sara and she's letting school and people get to her. I know that my issues are my issues but i had to write and still need to to get this feeling out of my system. I know you guys will give me what advice you can and if nothing else just read what i post here and comment on it. I'm venting and sometimes i put out good work. I'm just rambling at this point. Here's the first of many to come all to Sara about what i feel is the real issue
I love you,
And you said that was enough
I love you,
And you said that’s all that matters
I love you,
Yet you let others control you
I love you,
You come to me wishing you were different
I love you,
And you say you want respect from your peers
I love you,
Yet my love is not enough.
I love you,
And you complain that I don’t listen
I love you,
And you say we don’t talk enough
I love you,
Yet my words fall on someone only half there.
I love you,
And I want to be with you more,
I love you,
And want to make you smile forever
I love you,
Yet you listen to the world over me.
I love you,
And know you are my life,
I love you,
And know you will be my wife
I love you
Yet I’m not complete with you only half here.
I love you,
And you say you understand
I love you
And you say that you love me
I love you
Yet I am not enough to make you happy.
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Post by dragon on Apr 27, 2011 23:12:02 GMT -5
So i got off the phone with Sara and she's letting school and people get to her. I know that my issues are my issues but i had to write and still need to to get this feeling out of my system. I know you guys will give me what advice you can and if nothing else just read what i post here and comment on it. I'm venting and sometimes i put out good work. I'm just rambling at this point. Here's the first of many to come all to Sara about what i feel is the real issue
I love you,
And you said that was enough
I love you,
And you said that’s all that matters
I love you,
Yet you let others control you
I love you,
You come to me wishing you were different
I love you,
And you say you want respect from your peers
I love you,
Yet my love is not enough.
I love you,
And you complain that I don’t listen
I love you,
And you say we don’t talk enough
I love you,
Yet my words fall on only someone half there.
I love you,
And I want to be with you more,
I love you,
And want to make you smile forever
I love you,
Yet you listen to the world over me.
I love you,
And know you are my life,
I love you,
And know you will be my wife
I love you
Yet I’m not complete with you only half here.
I love you,
And you say you understand
I love you
And you say that you love me
I love you
Yet I am not enough to make you happy.
Damn... I would bang you in a angry sex way if you sent me that. Does that count? |
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:16:47 GMT -5
Somewhat X somewhat. It's good to know when i'm this emotional that i can't sleep, eat, cry, game, or think that i can write. I don't know what would happen if i couldn't
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Post by dragon on Apr 27, 2011 23:19:49 GMT -5
Somewhat X somewhat. It's good to know when i'm this emotional that i can't sleep, eat, cry, game, or think that i can write. I don't know what would happen if i couldn't I been there as well, my friend. Keep on writing if it makes you feel better. You are a talented poet. I always preferred to send angry stalker letters to my enemies. |
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:19:59 GMT -5
When you call
I always answer
When you cry
I always run
When you beg
I pick you up
When you attack
I calm you
You are a part of me
And I of you
You complete me
And I hope to do the same
I try and help whenever needed
Yet I’m just your lover only
In name in spirit at school,
I do what I can from a far
Age is cruel like that
I try and lift you above the crowd
But you let them hold on so tight
My love and strength is not enough
To break the grip they have
That holds you down at their mercy
Why can you not let go
Why am I not enough
Can’t you see my love
Is it because you're scared
Lonely, depressed, isolated
Tell me so I can fix it please
Holding you above my head
With all my might
Will never be enough
If you let everyone else's darkness
Drown out our love’s light
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:35:26 GMT -5
For you I’d sell everything
My games, my school, my friends, my life, and my soul
For you I won’t eat, sleep, or move
If only you say so
This body, This world
Are all cheap imitations
For your eyes, your touch, your breath
Are unworldly sensations
You, is all that matters
Simple and contrite
My heart, my blood, my mind
Are yours to use as you see right
Your pain and sorrow
Drive me up the walls
Your love, lust, and passion
Have me by the balls
I am your slave, your pet
And that I don’t want to change
Your thoughts, feeling, and emotions aren’t yours
Now isn’t that strange
You let the masses think and control
You want to fit in yet break the mold
I support you and love you how you are
Yet all the people control you from near and far
I want to help you break free from their control
But you’re stuck cause the masses want you on the down low
I will pick you up and carry you away
But are you strong enough to say “Good Day”
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:36:43 GMT -5
S
il
ence
A beautiful thing
Nothing said
No pain
No promise
Yet horrible
Nothing
Darkness
Blank and empty
Cold
Dead
Silence
A doubled edged
S
W
O
R
D
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 27, 2011 23:45:58 GMT -5
As you sleep
I stay up feverishly writing
Of love, loss, and couples fighting
I don’t wish you ill
I don’t want to be mean
But you words ripped my heart at it's seams
I love you
With all my heart
But tonight our minds and bodies were worlds apart
I came to help and cheer
You came to vent, to talk, to hear my voice
Yet when I talked you didn’t listen by your own choice
I can’t sleep
You dream in peace
I’m still writing while you float on the beach
What can I do but write my emotions
You soft counseling voice has long since faded
I feel these issues are not new but long baited
Why now so close to a year
Is my love not enough
Or have their words become stronger stuff
My princess, my darling
My baby, my sugar, my queen
Love me and yourself like this was a movie scene
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Christian Kane
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Post by Christian Kane on Apr 28, 2011 9:49:07 GMT -5
These are really good bro. You're talented as hell.
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 28, 2011 10:23:14 GMT -5
Eh. I only see two being worth while but thank you.
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Post by Skye on Apr 28, 2011 13:55:57 GMT -5
*swooon* I'm hella impressed. If a guy was writing stuff like that for me... well... what X said, but it wouldn't be angry  |
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 28, 2011 13:59:13 GMT -5
Well thank you skye. I'm flattered really. Guess i should let Sara see these then. I wasn't sure. Hell i'm still not but i've had time to settle down. I'd love more feedback and am thankful for what i've gotten. I never thought too much of my poetry but i guess i've got some talent after all.
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 28, 2011 22:52:25 GMT -5
So just for an update and another thank you. All is better seems not seeing each other for a while is bad for us. Spent the day together and we both felt much better. We talked through the issues and i hope laid them to rest.
Thank you all that have read and replied hope to hear from the rest of you
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Post by jackbull on Apr 28, 2011 23:29:36 GMT -5
I wouldn't be living up to my name as an asshole if I didn't step in and say;
*blurgh*
Where does this chick live? Quit writing her fucking poems, jump on a plane and go bang that shit!
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