CK Feedback Thread!

[Christian Kane]

Hit me up with that feedback, boys (and girls)! Because I'm always looking to improve. Obviously I'll return the favour, 'cos I'm nice like that

Passion
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Thanks!

[The Sky King]

Can I just say that this was a brilliant introduction to CK? Honestly, it seemed like you hit all the points that mattered (Match relevance, character introduction and development) and wrapped them up into one package which flowed smoothly as one piece of writing. Hell, even in the first segment, I already warmed to CK because he was introduced well. The interview at the end really solidified the character well and pretty much gave him the perfect introduction to the world of EUW. I don't think I can give you any criticisms, I'm sure some will, but I can't find any. The blocks of color might be detrimental to some, but for me they worked fine in differentiating the different characters. I look forward to seeing your next piece.

Welcome aboard, CK! Great roleplay all around!

[irobin]

Having never read any of your work before, this was a new experience for me, and, to that end, quite a fun one, too. Your roleplay was full of energy and well, passion, Christian Kane comes alive as a character that likes to flirt with the ladies, have fun and… Beat up civilians?

Yeah. I’m not entirely sure about that, but it was still entertaining. Not knowing what to expect from you, I had misgivings early on as you seemed to be talking about Danny Tenfold more than your opponents, but you rectified that during the interview with Sarah, so that’s all good. I liked the idea of “The CK Network”, it’s a bit different to what a lot of people here are doing at the moment and that definitely gives it all a fresh feel. It also felt like something that not only suited CK as a character, but would be done in real pro wrestling if it didn’t completely suck balls these days.

In one roleplay (and yes, I know you’ve done this before, so it should come as no surprise) you have managed to establish CK as not just a wrestler, but a character. I feel like I know exactly the kind of guy that he is, the way he goes about his business out of the ring and, to give me that sort of insight into the character in just one roleplay is impressive. Even for a fairly veteran roleplayer, that can take a few efforts to fully convey, but I now feel as if I understand CK pretty well and almost like I’ve caught up on his past, despite not knowing any of it. That’s cool and it earns some props from me.

All in all, it’s a good roleplay and I was impressed by it. This is my first introduction to Christian Kane and I liked it, I’ll certainly be interested in seeing if that continues as the time goes by.

[Christian Kane]

Thanks boys, taken all of what you guys have said on board.

Feedback will be on their way to both of ya! <3