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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 6, 2011 20:01:10 GMT -5
Something i just got inspired to write please leave comments and thoughts
A day whose beauty is captured by the greats
whose sun warms picnics and wind blows smiles
A day that brightens the soul and inspires the mind
It's music is its silent comforting presence
A day not about itself but of hope
A day that transcends a day
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Post by primetime on Apr 6, 2011 21:23:51 GMT -5
Something i just got inspired to write please leave comments and thoughts
A day whose beauty is captured by the greats
whose sun warms picnics and wind blows smiles
A day that brightens the soul and inspires the mind
It's music is its silent comforting presence
A day not about itself but of hope
A day that transcends a day That's pretty damn good, Roy. My girl just read it aloud and said to tell you that you should keep on writing poetry. |
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Post by The Cobra Viper on Apr 6, 2011 21:40:36 GMT -5
Well tell her thank you. It's a hobby and i do it from time to time. my Girl told me to post it and get more feedback
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Post by jackbull on Apr 6, 2011 22:41:48 GMT -5
Something i just got inspired to write please leave comments and thoughts
A day whose beauty is captured by the greats
whose sun warms picnics and wind blows smiles
A day that brightens the soul and inspires the mind
It's music is its silent comforting presence
A day not about itself but of hope
A day that transcends a day That's pretty damn good, Roy. My girl just read it aloud and said to tell you that you should keep on writing poetry. Since when did they start making talking, blow up dolls? |
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Post by James on Apr 6, 2011 22:48:17 GMT -5
That's pretty damn good, Roy. My girl just read it aloud and said to tell you that you should keep on writing poetry. Since when did they start making talking, blow up dolls? |
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Post by jackbull on Apr 6, 2011 23:23:32 GMT -5
 nice. |
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Post by Obi on Apr 6, 2011 23:24:49 GMT -5
Since when did they start making talking, blow up dolls?
haha!-Roy, I thought it was well written. You have a knack for poetry. |
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nice.
