London Strife Roleplay Feedback Thread

[Jeremy Sterling]

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First roleplay I've done with this version of this character. Also the first roleplay I've done in a while, let me know what you thought and how I can improve.

Thanks!

[irobin]

I quite liked it. It's certainly interesting enough, plenty of intrigue about who London Strike was, who he is now, whether he'll be able to make it as a wrestler etc.

There's not really anything too wrong about it, but it felt like more of a debut locker room roleplay than a match roleplay. Match relevance was pretty thin on the ground and there wasn't a lot of meat to it. It's a short roleplay, so you're hard pushed to say a lot in a short length, but it's done the job of getting me interested in the character and his background.

I think, really, it's quite good, but a bit more match relevance and maybe a little more in general and you're all set.