let me know what you guys think

[Bane]

Hey everyone I just put up my RP. I was wondering if you guys would read it and leave me some feedback on what you think. Also let me know what you think about all my rp's i put up from here on out.

thanks
Illidan Bane

[The Sky King]

Aside from the odd spelling and grammatical mistake, that was actually a damn good RP.I like how we get to explore a new part of Banes past with every RP you've put out so far, that's a plus. You focused decently enough on the match (I think you could use some more focus on the opponents, thouh. Can never have too much match relevance) and brought up how Bane took his loss. And the end of the RP was a great way to round it up, showing how Banes evolving as a wrestler.

All in all, a very solid RP! Definitely an interesting character.

[irobin]

It's a good roleplay. Interesting, plenty of back story that shows us where Illidan Bane began and how he has gotten to where he is. All the Bane roleplays so far work as a continuation on the story, so that helps encourage people to come back and read them each time to find out what comes next in the overriding story. Good to see Bane addressing his previous loss and making plans for his next match although, as Luck noted, some more match/opponent focus would be a good idea.

[Justin King]

I've noticed this in a few people's RPs. My name is not the Jackal. It's just Jackal.


Okay, that little splinter out of the way, I really enjoyed reading your RP. Gives us backstory on Bane, which is always great with new superstars. There was some match relevance, but there could have been a little more. All in all, it was a great read and I look forward to your next piece.

[Bane]

Thanks everyone for your support and idea's on my RP's. This really helps me write Bane's RP's better. Not just you guys will like them but tho make me a bettr writer in the EUW. And Jackal sorry about how I was writing your name in my RP's. Ill do my best to talk more about my matches. I patrly do it the way it is because he's new and know very little about the people he face. But ill do what I can. Please let me know what you guys this of my next RP when I post it thanks Bane

[Bane]

thank you all for the support in my rp's. Jackal sorry for messing up your name. But I do have one thing tosay and that is simply this: Since Bane is still new and most of the people that he face are new. It's hard to talk about the match a lot if he dosen't know a lot about the people that he is facing. That is why I don't focus on the matches so much. But any idea's you guys have are gladly accapted and wanted. thank you Illidan Bane

[CJ]

Mar 15, 2011 16:13:31 GMT -5 Bane said:

thank you all for the support in my rp's. Jackal sorry for messing up your name. But I do have one thing tosay and that is simply this: Since Bane is still new and most of the people that he face are new. It's hard to talk about the match a lot if he dosen't know a lot about the people that he is facing. That is why I don't focus on the matches so much. But any idea's you guys have are gladly accapted and wanted. thank you Illidan Bane

You thanked yourself, haha.
_{I am kidding, I understood.}