Post by Diabolik on Jan 13, 2011 8:42:23 GMT -5
So, what do you all think? Hopefully i've showed I am capable of writing good things again. It's not as short as my more recent RPs have been, which I am sorry for. Hopefully this is a step back onto the right track.
So, please, tell me what you liked, what you thought was rubbish. There's a fair bit of symbolism in that dream, by the way. Hopefully it wasn't all too obscure.
Also decided it might be interesting to try out a narrative style where it is basically all told by the character themself, rather than having it written like a story, it was more like D was recalling it himself. It seemed to flow more naturally that way, and lets you all know what he's thinking as well as what he's doing.
So, please, tell me what you liked, what you thought was rubbish. There's a fair bit of symbolism in that dream, by the way. Hopefully it wasn't all too obscure.
Also decided it might be interesting to try out a narrative style where it is basically all told by the character themself, rather than having it written like a story, it was more like D was recalling it himself. It seemed to flow more naturally that way, and lets you all know what he's thinking as well as what he's doing.
