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Post by irobin on Dec 27, 2010 19:36:33 GMT -5
Right, so this is the "feedback" for Amazing Jace's Christmas Carol.In truth, I need to stop drinking. As I mentioned in the TNISSE thread, I got very drunk and wrote my entry for that at 2am one night. Well, this is another such side effect of my drinking. Last week, before I wrote my TNISSE roleplay, I was full of Christmas spirits (mostly rum) and for some reason started writing some crap. I have a vague recollection of it, but when I woke up, I had 3/4 of the RP written and a bunch of notepad documents filled with character lists and stuff (yes, even when drunk). Well, I looked over it in the cold light of morning and decided it was crap. I didn't delete it for some reason and, a few nights later, I got drunk, wrote my TNISSE entry and then finished up this little story too. Needless to say, it took an age to tidy up the spelling, formatting and so on. It's a roleplay, written in character, so I don't mean any offense by it, and mean no disrespect to anyone by the way that they have been portrayed. However, with it being finished, I had the choice of tidying it up and posting it here for shits and giggles, or I could delete it forever. So, it's up here. Feel free to tell me that I need to get a life. Or to tell me anything else that reading this pointlessly long RP inspires in you.
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Post by Justin King on Dec 27, 2010 20:04:24 GMT -5
I couldn't help but laugh at the entire thing. It was a good read. Loved how, even in the future, Jackal and Roy still hang out. Good show, old bean, and keep up the good work.
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Post by F1 on Dec 28, 2010 11:05:21 GMT -5
Ha, that was a trip man. Good read and definitely funny and in the spirit of the season. Well done.
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