TNISSE Hail To The Captain feedback

[Diabolik]

So, what did you all think?

I figured it would be an interesting place to see Cervantes, in a tough position after he's lost his crew and ship. It'd be a cool place to maybe pick him up again if Sabora's up for it (nudge, nudge). I know it's a little short, and I apologise, but hopefully it's a good read, and I am looking forward to seeing what you think.

[Mr. C]

It was fun to read him as a very brash, very loud kind of guy. A man out of his time and out of his comfort zone, and the personality of the character led to him not shutting down but taking control. It was short indeed, but I think it lent itself to how you wrote it. Short, loud, simple. A very nice first RP for this event! Good work Bollocks!

[The Cobra Viper]

I agree with Cross. Fun read got me laughing.

[F1]

Simple yet strong opening to what could be an excellent follow on. I look forward to seeing how you carry this over into your next rp.

[Skye]

Hehehe, a fun read. Poor guy definitely needs a drink.

[Sabora]

Sorry it took me so long to review it, Diabolik. I took a little internet break. Very nicely done, Sir! I liked your take on the Captain! You have my full endorsement to use him anytime you wish.