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Obi
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Devin Croft Feedback Dec 19, 2010 16:45:56 GMT -5

Post by Obi on Dec 19, 2010 16:45:56 GMT -5

Alright, this will be the feedback spot for my new character, Devin Croft. I am really excited about fleshing this one out. The first chapter will be entitled, "It's never too late to die" and should be quite a long story arc. Feel free to leave feedback when compelled to. Keep in mind, I will reveal things slowly at a different pace as the storyline goes on. This is a spy tale after all.

The Prelude is up. The real story begins in January.

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Devin Croft Feedback Dec 20, 2010 8:47:00 GMT -5

Post by F1 on Dec 20, 2010 8:47:00 GMT -5

Excellent piece, I like how it truely tells a story. I definitely can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great details and description and consistant flow throughout the prelude. It makes me wonder if Croft were to ever meet Kraijcek in the future ha ha. Well written.