Bane
Prospect
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Post by Bane on Dec 4, 2010 13:49:04 GMT -5
Hey everyone I know that my rp's have been real let downs. But I hope you guys like this one. it maybe short but its to the point. please give me some feedback on my rps from now on thanks 415
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Post by primetime on Dec 5, 2010 16:44:28 GMT -5
Hey 415! Glad you finally got around to making a feedback thread.
This week, I could feel the frustration in 415's thoughts BIG time. The stress is starting to get to him. I would be angry too if I was him so good job conveying that. I am not a dude who judges roleplays based on length but I can't help but thinking that your piece was written in a short time span. It left me feeling like you said "Fuck it" so to speak. Thank you for the effort either way and maybe through this feedback section, we can get you on the road to success once again.
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