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Post by hurricane on Oct 5, 2010 6:04:09 GMT -5
Feel free to leave any feedback here. This won't be my only rp for SNV but I thought it was a good start. Also, after reading the suggestion from Scorp, I decided to try out color coding the character's dialogue. I did this years ago but abandoned it when I returned. Let me know whether it helps or hinders. Other then that feel free to say whatever you want. |
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Sabora
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Post by Sabora on Oct 7, 2010 0:54:14 GMT -5
Very well done, friend.
I enjoyed the conversations as usual. You seem to be really flowing well and Scorpion was right on the money about the colors. You have this "movie" feel to your work. Keep rolling with that.
You have a tough match ahead of you. The card has not been easy on you. Keep pushing on.
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Post by hurricane on Oct 7, 2010 1:05:43 GMT -5
Very well done, friend.
I enjoyed the conversations as usual. You seem to be really flowing well and Scorpion was right on the money about the colors. You have this "movie" feel to your work. Keep rolling with that.
You have a tough match ahead of you. The card has not been easy on you. Keep pushing on. Thanks alot for the feedback. I know I've definitely got a match ahead of me. I remember Meltdown very well and know that I'll have to pull out my A game for him but I'm more than happy to have tough matches. Plus I'm getting to take on some guys that I respected when I was in EUW before. Evan, Titan(Obi) and now Meltdown. Plus being able to team with you. I couldn't have asked for a better first month back. |
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Post by The Sky King on Oct 8, 2010 5:54:11 GMT -5
The colour coding is definitely a help, and I agree with Sabora that the RP has a very movie-script feel to it, which is definitely fitting for the character.
Overall, the RP was very good! The speech between the characters flowed well, the RP was well structured and easy to read, unlike many RPs which are stacked in massive chunks, and most importantly: It was entertaining. It wasn't just one big "Fuck You" speech, it was like a scene from a movie, and that's what gives it it's strength.
Great work, I'm going to have to step up to my A game for this week!
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