Christian's Apocalypse Event Feedback

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Anyone who wants to review my stuff you can do it here. Just if you do review one of mine classify which "day" it is so it doesn't get confusing. I'm VERY interested in people's opinions because personally I see this overall story as one of the greatest stories I've every told...or am in the process of telling.

Here's a complete listing of days so far.

Day 00
euw23.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fedstory&action=display&thread=4591

Day 04
euw23.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fedstory&action=display&thread=4636

Day 06
euw23.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=fedstory&thread=4725&page=1

Also I've created a number of new characters for use in my story and decided to show who I'm using for my own imagination while I'm writing. If you'd like to picture someone else you're free to. Here's the cast so far (may add more before I'm done):

Christian Stephens
Played by: John Morrison

Ray Wynters
Played by: Robert Downey Jr.

Virgil
Played by: Malcolm McDowell

Alice
Played by: Kristen Stewart


Desmond
Played by: Chris Evans

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Day 06 is now up!

euw23.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=fedstory&thread=4725&page=1

I'm curious though. Is anyone reading these? If so please let me know what you think because maybe I can alter certain things to make the experience more enjoyable for the other readers. Right now all I know is that I love it but I know that some of the scenes may not translate to the reader and that's what I fear, especially the more technical action sequences.

This has quickly become one of my favorite parts of EUW and I really wish that more people were involved.

Come on, EUW-ites! We need more survivors!

[Commissioner Warrior™]

Since I'm contributing so much to this, I'm also making a point to read others ones to see how they're taking things. With that said, I am going to read yours when I get time today or tomorrow, and I'll reply with some feedback then.

I did want to agree real quick though, on how much I'm enjoying it too. I hadn't really worried about it, and then I tried to do one or two, and I've gotten so wrapped into it that now I'm pouring out chapter after chapter. I think more people should give it a go, because I think you'll be surprised at how much of a blast it is.

[Commissioner Warrior™]

Now real feedback. I really like it. You're taking a spin that's pulling me in, it's making me wonder who the fuck 'they' are. The sixth sense thing I think is in some ways hilarious, and some ways great. Both good things. Overall, I'm loving it, and interested to see what's up next.

P.S. - Have you ever read the comic Jack of Fables? Sometimes Christian reminds me of Jack...alot. Hah.