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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Sept 8, 2010 10:31:19 GMT -5
So I'm up to Chapter 3 right now, and loving the whole thing. I got into the idea and now I feel like I'm just having an awesome burst of ideas, and loving turning them into writing.
So, I'm curious who's been reading them and what ya'll think. Do you like them? What do you think is going to happen next? Etc? Etc? Etc?
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Post by dragon on Sept 9, 2010 1:41:54 GMT -5
I added mine as well. It felt good being X again. Expect more from me soon.  Oh, and Warrior.. your rp was great.  |
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Sept 14, 2010 21:50:17 GMT -5
I'm all the way up to Chapter 6 now, and I've still got plenty to go. We haven't even talked to the President yet! So how's everyone liking it?
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Sept 22, 2010 10:08:49 GMT -5
Chapter 7: The Red House is up, and things are getting more ridiculous as things go on. So what do you think?
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Sept 30, 2010 0:38:44 GMT -5
And so goes Chapter 8 and Chapter 9. Things are getting interesting. The Republic of Texas? The 23rd Sam Houston Battalion? The Alamo?!
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Oct 4, 2010 0:50:46 GMT -5
Chapter 10 is up now, and we're about to be on the brink of all hell breaking loose. Hope everyone's enjoying it. Leave a little feedback if you like, even if it's just letting me know you've been reading them. ;D
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Nov 19, 2010 0:08:41 GMT -5
Chapter 12 is up, which has taken me quite some time and I'm not extremely fond of either. But the story must go on! I've got somewhere I'm going with this and I'm gonna get there however long it takes me!
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Post by F1 on Nov 24, 2010 9:29:43 GMT -5
I agree it wasn't your best but I thought it was pretty solid and definitely enjoyable. Just didn't like the misuse of military terms. That could have been researched but that just me being critical. I digress, you still have me wondering what's gonna go down. It was short and sweet and extremely efficient like Kendra. Keep up the good work man.
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Nov 24, 2010 11:59:07 GMT -5
Yeah, that was probably part of my issue with this one. I set myself up to need lots of research to make it really correct, and got to the point where I didn't want to do that research. So I ended up just blazing through it. While some of it's understandable, Warrior and Kendra aren't going to know all the ins and outs of the military, they're just going to do it their way, still. And thanks. I do have somewhere I'm going with this. Eventually, hah. I've got till Christmas. |
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Post by F1 on Nov 24, 2010 23:22:00 GMT -5
I figured, no worries man, I've done that before. It was still solid and it's good that you're going to keep them kinda modeling their military basically the way they say fit. But I look forward to seeing where this is at by Christmas ha ha.
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