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Post by Obi on Oct 20, 2009 19:11:01 GMT -5
You know the drill. Keep in mind I am pretty sick and had to blast through that show with one writer, lol. Also, I put a spin the Hardkore title to reflect the no shows. (I am tired of glorifying no shows). I hope I set up for HH pretty well. Anyway, what did you think?
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Post by Mr. C on Oct 20, 2009 19:57:05 GMT -5
I really liked it, it was promo heavy and that's exactly what this place needs right now. Between lack of members and no-shows, it's one thing our fed can do to utilize what we have (brilliant and creative writers) and not try and force what we don't have (a huge roster). The show was certainly one of the most tumultuous yet, with a ton of build up occuring. Sabora is becomming more and more of an SOB, The Puzzos (Retribution?) are becoming a hillarious tag-team I'd love to see more of - their characters infinitely better when they focus on humorous dialogue as was seen in the promos for this show, it's certainly a skill they can make in to some great writing, Brett Cross has a purpose and dead weight has been dropped.
Again, I really like how we're pulling together with our low numbers. Two of the best shows we've had in ages.
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Post by jackbull on Oct 20, 2009 20:22:39 GMT -5
Well the promo I sent in went AWOL and the last match felt really rushed. I appreciate though that you had to do a lot yourself and while under the weather.
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Post by Obi on Oct 20, 2009 20:25:38 GMT -5
Well the promo I sent in went AWOL and the last match felt really rushed. I appreciate though that you had to do a lot yourself and while under the weather. As I said, I am living with a pretty good fever here and I felt it was better to get it done and out early.. then make it delayed. I am sorry that you felt dissatisfied. (And I apologize for the lack of the promo.)
As for the last match, it was far from rushed. It took me an hour to do it. As for the quality of it, I always feel I could do better too. I needed to leave off the show leading into HH with a bang though. I felt that was the best way to do it.
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Post by Obi on Oct 20, 2009 20:32:15 GMT -5
Ok, Jack. Your promo has been added. ;D
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Post by jackbull on Oct 20, 2009 21:25:20 GMT -5
respect
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Post by Diabolik on Oct 21, 2009 11:26:24 GMT -5
I am so, so sorry about the Urahara no show. For some reason, I didn't even notice his name on the card. On the other hand, I really like how Diabolik's match turned out, and Sabora's revenge. Very well written, nice one!
I will read the card much more carefully in future. I've been really tired lately, averaging about 3 hours sleep a night, etc... I can still write though. I will make sure it never happens again.
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Post by Mr. C on Oct 21, 2009 11:36:16 GMT -5
^ I've done that before, no trouble.
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Post by dragon on Oct 21, 2009 17:12:23 GMT -5
That was truly an awesome show. If I nit picked it, I would say that Xplode getting sent to the hospital is starting to be redundant but hey.. that was only a small thing. I loved the promos! It gives feeling to the show and makes it less bland. The ending was sweet too. Chris Sabora has really become a star. The Puzzos are funny as shit as well. It's good to really start to see them and get to know them. Brett Cross is finally being used and that really makes me happy. I felt he was being wasted.
9/10. GREAT show.
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