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Post by Diabolik on Dec 23, 2007 11:21:37 GMT -5
You all know the drill by now...
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Post by Jeremy Sterling on Dec 23, 2007 12:46:38 GMT -5
I'm not sure about it, but there was just something in that roleplay that kept me from connecting with it. I guess it wasn't as descriptive as I would prefer for a roleplay to be. Maybe next time you should describe the scene more and make it as vivid as possible using things such as similes and metaphors, then again that also just be my personal taste as I am huge into reading poetry and similes/metaphors are big in poetry. But, yeah I wasn't particularly fond of that roleplay, but it was a good attempt. It's by no means the worst thing I've ever read, it's just not the best either.
I'd give it about a 7/10.
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Post by Commissioner Warrior™ on Dec 23, 2007 13:09:23 GMT -5
Well, it wasn't an epic. Not at all. But I did enjoy reading it. I'll agree with Sterling in saying that I could have enjoyed a bit more description. Partly going with my style of writing, and with what I enjoy to read. But it was good. Like I told you earlier, I loved reading it. I found a large part of it funny, which I've always felt humor is a good thing to use. Again, I loved it. No epic, but still good and funny.
Rating wise, I'd say 7.9/10
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