Ok, Ok

[rodriguez]

I really don't know why I wrote that last night. Maybe it was because I wasn't in the right state of mind. But here is something I want to know how I did. I believe that I actually did the magical proof read instead of just posting a half fast rp. So.. I hope you all like this one. I also thought it would be a good Idea to throw Sally(Bitch-In-Law) in to my problems. Hell it could be funny

THIS GAME ISN'T OVER:
www.euw23.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=ppvrps&action=display&thread=1197849874&page=1

[echoesie]

Having just read it, I'm sitting here...and the first thought I got was the good ol' "WTF!?". I'm a realist, so it was odd to have all that going on at once. I'm not sure what you were trying to accomplish, either. You have a good base for a family rivalry, and then a good base for the sorta "Mysterious" set of RP's. But combining them both, I think, was a bad idea. Throwing two ideas together, and then not diving deeper into either was a bit tough on the conscious.

Either than that, it gave a good idea of who your character is and his sorta "I can do anything, even if I am new!" underdog mentality. Look forward to reading more.