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Post by Jeremy Sterling on Dec 16, 2007 1:04:46 GMT -5
How was my first roleplay in roughly a year? I know I can improve, just give me some advice on how I can better my roleplay.
~J. Sterling
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Post by rodriguez on Dec 16, 2007 2:27:27 GMT -5
Please change colors or something. Make them all mixed with something at least. I can't really read it good right now. But otherwise I have no problem with the rp  |
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Post by Immanuel Taylor on Dec 16, 2007 4:32:35 GMT -5
Well I personally thought the color was ok, but that;s just me. And as for the RP, all I gotta say is nicely done. Seriously Sterling, the description gave me an orgasm. And your what seems like eternal struggle with your depression is thirlling. You know sometimes I see that the thing you and I share the most in our RP's is description. It was spotless in this one. Nicely Done.
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Post by Jeremy Sterling on Dec 16, 2007 10:05:47 GMT -5
Ha ha thanks Lincoln. And I'll attempt to change the color if it'll help you read it.
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