RATE:Welcome Home

["The End" is near]

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I didn't work on this RP very much, it just laid on my desktop until I worked on it last night and today. I did incorporate some of my life into this one, I do backyard wrestle. Rate and help if ya want to

[Immanuel Taylor]

Nice, I really liked how you explained your backyard wrestling past but other than that I thought the RP was average. I mean don't get me wrong, I liked the setting and all but I would have prefered if you went in a bit more detail. Like describing certain things about the color, describing what you were wearing and maybe the weather or atmosphere around you. Other than that, the RP was nice but you should pay attention more to detail and such next time.