RATE: 1manSTORM

[Nick Fudge]

a bit of a comeback RP, the first one i've wrote in like a year and a half or so.. its alright, not perfect..gramatical errors all over. i wrote it i the EUW box so i didn't have MS Word to help me.
but tell me what you think of it as far as writing style, and direction.

sorry for the sloppy ending, i just threw that together to wrap it up before i took all night to right it.

[Immanuel Taylor]

Ok since you did write it in the EUW box, I'll pretty much ignore all the grammar errors and such. Now I personally thought the RP was awesome, showing what happened to you after EUW and how you were a bum and alcoholic but wouldn't it take more than three days to overcome alcoholism? Other than that, it was great. Good to have you back Fudgey.

[Nick Fudge]

yeah haha well im gonna take care of that in a few, just consider that RP the start of something.