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Post by The Sky King on Oct 10, 2011 14:01:38 GMT -5
So, all in all, improvements need to be made.
Alright then. I can work on them.
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Post by dragon on Oct 10, 2011 21:26:35 GMT -5
Favourite Match: Skyler vs NatI think you must have meant Skye vs Skyler  Skyler and Nat are both Kris's characters Skye is mine. This was an issue in writing the match as well - Skyler and Skye were interchanged a couple of times resulting in Skyler doing damage to herself. I might have more feedback later, when I can read the rest of the show more fully (I'm at work, as usual for a Monday) OK.. I GET IT.. lol I wrote a shitty match. Let it go already lol.. review other parts of the show.  |
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Post by Skye on Oct 10, 2011 21:47:49 GMT -5
OK.. I GET IT.. lol I wrote a shitty match. Let it go already lol.. review other parts of the show. That wasn't what i meant at all.  The match was ok (mmhmm, just ok) - your editing however... sucked. |
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Post by Sabora on Oct 10, 2011 21:50:29 GMT -5
OK.. I GET IT.. lol I wrote a shitty match. Let it go already lol.. review other parts of the show. That wasn't what i meant at all. The match was ok (mmhmm, just ok) - your editing however... sucked. I think he understands that the match was not enjoyed by all, editing or otherwise. Let's give the man a break now. This is a feedback thread though, so if you would like to review the rest of the show in the same amount of depth, we would appreciate it. |
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Post by Skye on Oct 11, 2011 7:32:23 GMT -5
whoa - 'scuse me!
I was teasin' him. - thus the smilies.
pardon me Chris... I said I'd get my feedback out when I had time to read the entire show in-depth.
I had a few "none" answers, so I just left those out.
Favourite Segment: I have to agree, the Hetfield segment was my fave. I like the character, and hope to see more of him lambasting the management.
How well was the show written? (9/10) I really enjoyed reading the show overall, as usual. I’ve not found the different writing styles too much an issue myself, but that’s me. Considering that the RPs come in so close to the deadline, the staff did a great job. I know you guys don’t often have time for the minor editing (and in future, I know that teasing is not allowed from me – got that message loud and clear). Yes, there can be some tweaks, but that’s normal with a new team. NP
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Post by dragon on Oct 11, 2011 11:07:03 GMT -5
No worries, Skye. |
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